What do you guys think?

Hi there! Enrique Mochales, a writer friend of mine- lend me a story in order to illustrate it: The writer that laid a novel.

Enrique says that a writer is like a chicken that lays novels. One night the writer in the story worked a lot in order to write a very good novel but after he did it, he felt asleep over the table. After that, he dreamed that a giant hand lifted the ceiling and took the novel off. In the morning the novel was gone.

I worked slowly during three weeks in this illo, and I think it is my very first illo, for real. I'm thinking about made some more for create a portfolio and searching for a rep. What do you think? I need your sincere opinion :)